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Tuesday, 9 September 2014

My Writing Sample

As I look to my right, I see hills from a distance, far away with a little farm on it, with stacks of hay next to it and a large fence guarding it like a dozen of knights guarding a castle. I look down to see fields and fields of dead grass laying in the hot summers sun, turning from green to brown, almost looking like hay.

The sounds of a motorcycles zoom draws my attention to the back of me , I turn around to see a little girl on a mini bike who was racing around on a dirt track , jump up into the air, bouncing off a bump in the ground. She tenses and I see her clench on tight to the handles of her bike. I feel both fear and excitement at the same time. In my mind I’m thinking all kinds of things like, “Will she make it?” “What if she falls?” “She can do it!” “Or will she end up in hospital?” I bet she’s thinking the same things. My heart is racing, it beats faster every second. I wonder if the man across of her is feeling scared for her, or if he will be impressed if she makes it? I stare at her in amazement, and feel speechless!!!

I feel glad that kids are allowed to race mini bikes these days and are allowed to use high tech vehicles!!!

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